Thursday, February 23, 2012

Space 13 are great writers. We have been using adjectives and similes to make our writing more interesting for someone else to read.
Please enjoy reading about Ngawai’s kitten.

My Kitten                                
My kitten’s name is Mallow.
She has bright blue eyes, white and grey fur and furry feet. Her nose is like my pink, pearl bracelet.
Her whiskers are as strong as rulers.
Mallow likes to eat the brown cat biscuits and the meaty, gluey, brown, soggy wet dog and cat roll.
I think my cat is special to me because she is a playful cat and she likes cuddles. I know that she is playful because every time you wriggle your fingers she chases them and when she gets your fingers, she bites and scratches your hands. It doesn’t hurt. It tickles.
She sleeps like a new born baby. 
                                                    Ngawai

1 comment:

  1. Ngawai you have used lots of describing words in your writing. I liked when said "She sleeps like a new born baby". I hope my baby sleeps like your cat!

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